The story ''none of her business'' is talking about a brave girl who is named Pat to save a blind woman. One time she was waiting for the bus to go home then she found a blind women by chance. Pat paid attention to the woman at all times, because she wondered how the woman would know when to get her bus. At first Pat wanted to help her but she didn’t. She just looked at her. At that moment a man walked to talk to the woman. Pat was happy because she thought the man was to help the woman. But then Pat saw the man was take the woman toward the street not the bus station. She wondered what was happening, so she followed them. Then Pat found the man was trying to trick the woman, and she became nervous want to find someone to help her. Finally, Pat decided to save the woman and the man dropped the woman’s arm and dashed off down the street. Pat was succeed to save the woman from being hurt.
After reading this story I am admire Pat's brave and obliging and happy to know there is still warm in this modern society. Although there are still coldly people like the hot-dog stand, we should do our best to help people. If people in the world can do like Pat do so, the world should become more and more wonderful.With an enthusiastic heart all the time!
1 則留言:
Hi, Gina:
I am Emma. The option of your article is the same with mine. The character of the story is really a justice girl .Everyone in the world should help the people who need help indeed.
There is something you do well. For example, you use the phrase in line 4.And you do pay attention to the tense. But I still found some little mistakes in your article. For example, in line 7 “how to get her bus” is much better than “when to get her bus”.
Just like what you say”If people in the world can do like Pat do so, the world should become more and more wonderful. With an enthusiastic heart all the time! ” The world really need more and more love.
張貼留言